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[~|| Face the truth [Demo]]

nice melody but kinda dull, need lighter tone

i like the melody, how nice if I could change the instruments you used in this song :D the melody here sounds dull as in kinda dark, if changed to a lighter tone like the one used in 0:45 that would be awesome !

T-Free responds:

Yes, a lighter melody would sound great to the song. I'll change that synth sound at 0:45 and if it sounds good, I'll leave it with the lighter melody. Additionally there will be some other new sounds in the full version, I hope you'll take a listen at it when it's finished. ;)

[~|| Unpublished songs #2]

my favorite tracks

0:01 - 0:26 - Track 1 [T-Free] <<< reminds me of lith harbor game bgm
1:22 - 1:48 - Track 4 [T-Free] <<< sounds kinda sad/emotional
2:10 - 2:37 - Track 6 [T-Free]
4:57 - 5:35 - Track12 [T-Free]

T-Free responds:

Thank you very much for listening to both tracks and naming the ones you like!^^

[~|| Unpublished songs #1]

my favorite track

Here is my list of favorites track in this compilation :D
0:55 - 1:21 - Track 3 [T-Free]
2:10 - 2:36 - Track 6 [Caine1989; T-Free] << change the instruments
2:36 - 3:02 - Track 7 [T-Free]
4:01 - 4:27 - Track10 [T-Free] << choir hohoho
4:54 - 5:23 - Track12 [T-Free]

T-Free responds:

Thanks for the review! :]

[Melodic Dance -=8bit Remake=-]

love the melody

very nice melody! downloaded rated 5/5
will be using in my latest video :D

Myuziq responds:

SWEET XD

[Sungazer (OM)]

butterscotch yo

Quite repetitive, but not so that it becomes boring, but I'd love to hear some other stuff going on, more varied progression, etc.

I agree with this :)

Kr1z responds:

I always try not to be too repeative. I'm sorry i failed. :( What about my interlude? My pad breakdown? My pluck breakdown? My anticlimax? My melody variation part? I've put alot of effort in the progression :/ I don't see how I can make it more varied.
If you want me to change something, you could propose some examples.

Could u be any less helpfull?

Thanks !

[~EnV~Come Home]

sounds good ^_^

ayumi gives you a hi-5 :D

Envy responds:

Yesssssss Hi five!

[~Once Again~]

this song has potential!

I like the melody , but need some climax, speed up some parts, this song can be refine to become better :D

looking forward for a longer version

PowPowSamurai responds:

maybe someday! thanks again for the feedback! =D

[Don't Speak 8-Bit remix]

butterscotch yo

the drum beat from 0:13 - 1:49 is not related, kinda boring...
too slow.. and climax doesnt sound right
im don't speak fan, listen to this song long time ago, my favorite :D

newrounds1 responds:

yeah i know :( but climax sound :P? the sounds is ment to be like oldschool gaming style if u know. but yes it's a great song

[{NA} Amaranth 8-Bit]

8-bit rocks! I'll use this in my video :D

Respect. Hope you make more 8-bit songs ^_^
Yours is fantastic! I like the melody

DJ-Gerian responds:

Thanks, I just might make more in the future due to all the recent positive feedback =).

[Moon~Light]

good

but not enough kick.
good melody, but it seems like it could not explode it out. it feels constraint.
for that reason, it seems monotonous .

butterscotch yo

Shinrog responds:

depends on the headphones or the boxes you have. some ae picking more beats, some are more bass. For me the kick was just fine, for you might've been quite.