ayumilove2's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

Nice but can be even better with this suggestions

0:26-0:28 not really good transition
1:57-1:58 not really a good transiution
1.58-2:05 : This is a very nice ending, original! I expect this uniqueness in the mid as well, but the main theme of the song should not overpower in the mid, this will it nicer since the user would not need to listen to something repetitive. Its like saving the good part melody of eurodancer for beginning and near ending

Fredgy responds:

ok!

[[dj-Jo] Contingency of Music]

Dance and Trance is the best!

I like this 2, its the best out of the rest of the mini tracks.
However, placing them together makes it harmony.

[Tell Me Why <Champius Rmx>]

received pm

i received a pm from you, saying that you reupload a song, but which 1?

Champius responds:

umm....hah im not sure?? maybe this one?

[~|| Face the truth [Demo]]

nice melody but kinda dull, need lighter tone

i like the melody, how nice if I could change the instruments you used in this song :D the melody here sounds dull as in kinda dark, if changed to a lighter tone like the one used in 0:45 that would be awesome !

T-Free responds:

Yes, a lighter melody would sound great to the song. I'll change that synth sound at 0:45 and if it sounds good, I'll leave it with the lighter melody. Additionally there will be some other new sounds in the full version, I hope you'll take a listen at it when it's finished. ;)

[RenegadeX9 - Chaos Fantasy]

nice work!

i like paragonx chaos fantasy, but this one sounds much better :D favorited

[~|| Unpublished songs #2]

my favorite tracks

0:01 - 0:26 - Track 1 [T-Free] <<< reminds me of lith harbor game bgm
1:22 - 1:48 - Track 4 [T-Free] <<< sounds kinda sad/emotional
2:10 - 2:37 - Track 6 [T-Free]
4:57 - 5:35 - Track12 [T-Free]

T-Free responds:

Thank you very much for listening to both tracks and naming the ones you like!^^

[~|| Unpublished songs #1]

my favorite track

Here is my list of favorites track in this compilation :D
0:55 - 1:21 - Track 3 [T-Free]
2:10 - 2:36 - Track 6 [Caine1989; T-Free] << change the instruments
2:36 - 3:02 - Track 7 [T-Free]
4:01 - 4:27 - Track10 [T-Free] << choir hohoho
4:54 - 5:23 - Track12 [T-Free]

T-Free responds:

Thanks for the review! :]

[Melodic Dance -=8bit Remake=-]

love the melody

very nice melody! downloaded rated 5/5
will be using in my latest video :D

Myuziq responds:

SWEET XD

[Sungazer (OM)]

butterscotch yo

Quite repetitive, but not so that it becomes boring, but I'd love to hear some other stuff going on, more varied progression, etc.

I agree with this :)

Kr1z responds:

I always try not to be too repeative. I'm sorry i failed. :( What about my interlude? My pad breakdown? My pluck breakdown? My anticlimax? My melody variation part? I've put alot of effort in the progression :/ I don't see how I can make it more varied.
If you want me to change something, you could propose some examples.

Could u be any less helpfull?

Thanks !

[~EnV~Come Home]

sounds good ^_^

ayumi gives you a hi-5 :D

Envy responds:

Yesssssss Hi five!